remember
do you remember
loving me
do you remember
the cloud cover, you called it, to not think of me
do you remember
the house you built to be anywhere else but
do you remember
when the bad weather came inside
do you remember
how to lay on your bed in the rain
do you remember
getting old, one night
do you remember
when love made you bilingual
do you remember
reading me in the dark
do you remember
the first time you said sorry, on your own
do you remember
sorry, as a house, you’ve never left
do you remember
me coloring you in, with my hands
do you remember
the rain, backwards, as a cloud
do you remember
each no it took to say yes
do you remember
your first word
do you remember
your last
do you remember it,
any other way?
petals and bees 
Dang – this works. Thanks for sharing your work. -Tom